We were so close together
Now so far apart
What happened in between
I can only feel in my heart
I wish you were here
To talk with me today
But I can't give a call
My body won't obey
Things seemed to be so perfect
Now they seem so wrong
I don't feel as though I know you
Where has our friendship gone
You used to be able to talk with me
About everything you felt
Now I feel I'm a stranger
My heart is starting to melt
We always used to talk
Until the middle of the night
I don't know what we talked about
But never once in a fight
I need you in my life
I need you as a friend
I need to laugh and cry with you
Forever 'till the end
I still don't know what has happened
Our friendship has lasted so long
But I can't help from wondering
What did I do wrong?
7 comments:
If feelings were to be expressed in words... this gals is the dictionary.... if feelings were to express by eyes.. this gal is the vision... and if feelings were to expressed by heart... this gal is the.......Beats!!!!
be as creative and sweet as u are aashi.. take care !!
"T" salaam!!!
if "a" is for awesome thn definetley "a" is for ashita too....
spcly wid her all poems....
n spcly dis first one....its 4 ppl who love n lost....sm grtt wrds n expression.....keep it up aashi...u r doing grtttt!!!!!!
nicE wOrk, this pArticulAr pOem sHow thE pOet's dEep thiNking regArd thE friEndship, hOw shE values hEr friends'.... friEndship in this pOem is pictuRed as a friEnd longing and missinG thE beautiful mOments of the
friEndship shAred, thE fEeling hAv hAv been presentEd is vEri simple langauge yEt thE expRessions n cOordinations between the feeliNgs arE pResentEd very nicEly. :)
hats off!!!
i dont know this gal.. bt it seems tht she has really learnt a lot from life..
it is clearly depicted in her creations.. what true friendsip is.. although,, the language is simple bt the feelings are deep enough to take everyone's breath away..
well i hope tht she really goes far in her field.. a poet in making.. i can say about her..
wishin u good luck..
The one who thinks tht a relationship is forever is at fault. i believe change drives the world and nothing is permanent. Its naive to believe tht he or she wont leave you.
eternal love exists but in eternity. the heroine:)..sorry..protagonist shall stop dreaming....and give reality a chance to welcome her.
Hi Ashi
That was beautifully touching and a sensitive piece of you
You do write well
Cheers
Vinay
really like the part where she says that heart/mind wills her to pick up the phone and call her friend - but her body doesnt obey.. this is so much how it happens for real. Ego baby - undoes everything.
I really like this one.
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