Those times are sweet!
When your trembling hands find that touch,
When those stooping shoulders relax a bit,
Those cry-dried eyes find that glow...
You scream with the joy,
Forgetting what you’re meant to be!
No blood, no emotions, its love’s sway,
I love you, is all you breathe to say!
Every next couple makes you miss,
Every rain drop urges you to kiss,
Never, never alone in any bliss…
Times, they’re those that you're
bound to miss!
The fierce gush of wind,
falters the lamp,
You wonder how the trust you built-
Looses the ground it ever had...
When they irk, you take it cool,
When you get on their', you're called a fool!
What was so damn clear turns a paradox,
And it’s not all over yet, a lot more to bear!
When they're angry, they have got a reason,
And instant you lose your’, you're a freak!
Those hugs, laughs, those unending talks!
The long rides, now turn dreaded thoughts!
They don’t know how it is, when one’s deserted,
Ask the flower that never
bloomed, coz it died!
When you’ve been to the skies, you despise dust,
Its time to realize, it was love or lust!Lust is fine, but it pains you big,
When corpse of love is what you dig!
Those hands tremble again, the shoulders stoop,
Eyes go dry, and you know you’re doomed!
Smiles turned heavy, lone is the word,
You change yourself,and think it’s enough
You don’t know what you’re waiting for,
Perhaps to know what’s on other side…But your battered heart gives just up,
Gives up what, you once thought was right!
This is my lil attempt to express my feelings... hope i have justified it by my creations...
Sunday, September 9, 2007
Times are sweet!!!!!
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4 comments:
You captured the essence of unrequited love. To be completely committed to someone who seems to be only passing the time while waiting for someone "better" to come along. Or at least that was my long ago experience with it. Thanks for sharing, it was well written and touching.
A. J.
That was a very beautiful poem. Brought out the helplessness in an unrequited angst with a certain beauty that is known only to those who have felt it. Very beautiful.
You do write well.
Now was that not sensitive and touching ...Beautifully written ....Simple yet ,penetrating the deepest layer of insecurity that come when you love too much ..
To much devotion makes you soo weak and vulnerable ..I can almost feel the helplessness of wanting to hold on to this transient sentiment for a little bit longer !!
Loved it ..Write more
I Wonder why sweet times
have to always fly by
I wonder what seems to be so real
has to mercilessly die
Love is so precious and so delicate it is
There is no other illusion as this uncompassionate bliss
It leaves you drained of faith
It leaves you incomplete
As if it wandered in yuor life
to steal away your peace
But honestly ,I would embrace it with open arms
All ready to break and fall
Coz it's true that it's better to have loved and lost
Than to have never loved at all
Its great to read such an honest flow of emotions !!
Keep Writing !!
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